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Formal Dear Mara, The launch brief remains outstanding, and we are now three days behind the agreed schedule. The revised version expected by 10:00 this morning has not arrived; the shared folder still contains the 14 March draft with the old pricing table and placeholder text on page 6. Please send one complete version by 4:00 p.m. Thursday, 21 March, including: 1. Updated prices for the Basic, Team, and Northstar plans. 2. The final customer quotes, with permission confirmed. 3. The corrected timeline and the new image credits. 4. A short note explaining the 18% increase in the implementation estimate. I recognise the supplier changed delivery dates late yesterday and caused confusion, but the review meeting cannot be moved again. Tomas has reserved the conference room for Friday morning, and the client team expects the materials before then. Please do not send another partial draft; if something is unavailable, mark it clearly and advise what remains outstanding. Friendly Hi Mara, Quick nudge — the launch brief is still not ready, and we're three days behind the schedule we agreed on. I was hoping for the revised version by 10:00 this morning, but the shared folder still shows the 14 March draft, with the old pricing table and placeholder text on page 6. Could you send one complete version by 4:00 p.m. Thursday, 21 March, covering: 1. Updated prices for the Basic, Team, and Northstar plans. 2. The final customer quotes, with permission confirmed. 3. The corrected timeline and the new image credits. 4. A short note explaining the 18% increase in the implementation estimate. I know the supplier changed delivery dates late yesterday and that caused confusion — totally understandable — but we really can't keep moving the review meeting. Tomas has already reserved the conference room for Friday morning, and the client team is expecting the materials before then. Just don't send another half finished draft; if anything's genuinely unavailable, mark it clearly and let me know what's still outstanding. Confident Mara, The launch brief is still not ready, and we are three days behind the schedule we agreed on. The revised version was due by 10:00 this morning; instead, the shared folder still holds the 14 March draft, with the old pricing table and placeholder text on page 6. Send one complete version by 4:00 p.m. Thursday, 21 March, including: 1. Updated prices for the Basic, Team, and Northstar plans. 2. The final customer quotes, with permission confirmed. 3. The corrected timeline and the new image credits. 4. A short note explaining the 18% increase in the implementation estimate. The supplier changed delivery dates late yesterday — I understand that caused confusion — but we will not move the review meeting again. Tomas has already reserved the conference room for Friday morning, and the client team expects the materials before then. Do not send another partially finished draft; if something is genuinely unavailable, mark it clearly and tell me what is still outstanding. Diplomatic Hi Mara, I wanted to check in, as the launch brief is still pending and we've slipped three days behind the schedule we agreed on. I was expecting the revised version by 10:00 this morning, but the shared folder still shows the 14 March draft — with the old pricing table and the placeholder text on page 6. When convenient, could you send one complete version by 4:00 p.m. Thursday, 21 March, including: 1. Updated prices for the Basic, Team, and Northstar plans. 2. The final customer quotes, with permission confirmed. 3. The corrected timeline and the new image credits. 4. A short note explaining the 18% increase in the implementation estimate. I fully appreciate the supplier changed delivery dates late yesterday and caused some confusion. At the same time, moving the review meeting again would be difficult — Tomas has already reserved the conference room for Friday morning, and the client team is expecting the materials before then. If possible, please avoid sending another partially finished draft; if something is genuinely unavailable, marking it clearly and letting me know what's outstanding would be very helpful.