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We are pleased to announce that the company's third quarter results have exceeded our internal targets, and while the CEO and the CFO were both happy with the outcome, there are some concerns about the sustainability of this growth. The team in the Asia Pacific region has contributed significantly to the overall numbers, and their division lead presented a very detailed report during the meeting; however, we need to remember that several smaller clients have expressed reservations about renewing their contracts next year. In addition to this, the marketing department has been understaffed for quite some time, and the recent campaign results have not been as strong as we hoped they would be, so we are recommending a review of our current strategy before committing to any large expenditures in the forthcoming fiscal year. What I changed Fixed spelling: announce, significantly, overall, department, quite, hoped, recommending, strategy, forthcoming, Pacific. Corrected subject–verb agreement: results have, CEO and CFO were, clients have, team has. Fixed "some concern" to "some concerns" and "very detail" to "very detailed". Changed possessive "companys" to "company's" and "there contracts" to "their contracts". Capitalized sentence starts and "Asia Pacific". Added commas and a semicolon before "however" to separate clauses.